Thursday, March 26, 2009 -
fiction
11 comments
Three Word Thursday
This week's words:
- bacchante 1. A priestess or female follower of Bacchus
- queachy 1. Yielding or trembling under the feet, as moist or boggy ground; shaking; moving. 2. Like a queach; thick; bushy. [a "queach" is: A thick, bushy plot; a thicket.]
- jibber 1. To move all around in a chaotic fashion 2. someone/something who moves all around in a chaotic fashion.
And a one ... and a two ....
Down for the Count
The bawdy bacchante blew out of the bar as if she treaded upon a queachy quagmire. She jibbered here and there jangling with all her jewels, pitching to and fro as if on a ship during a high gale. Soon she was snoring on a sofa, but tomorrow, she would discover the wages of sin.
11 comments:
Very funny. The wages of sin are painful.
Short sweet and too the point with the words. Great job.
What a fun exercise!
Very good story. The moral is very clear.
She will pay for too much. Good story.
Short, to the point and funny! I like it. LOL!
Btw, I found your first comment in my spam folder and pulled you out!
Nessa: One way or another, they always seem to catch up with you in the end. lol
Thom: Brevity is not usually my strong suit. Glad you liked it!
Stacy: Yeah, it is fun, and it can be done in so many ways.
Dr. John: Thanks!
Betty: Too much or not enough. lol
Quilly: So glad you found it. Thought I was going crazy there for a while. (Crazier than normal that is. lol)
Now you write more like a dragon. Short, to the point and almost perfect.
We have posted.
Fandango: High praise indeed! :)
Jientje: So kind of you to say so.
Cherie, I very much enjoyed this story. Short and sweet, great use of Quilly's 3 words. Well done.
Alice: Thanks so much!
Post a Comment